Esther Sylvester

Hey, there! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today! Don't scrap it! The worst you can do to your written pieces is scrap them. If anything "failed" pieces ...

Hi! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Very, very good job. Since this is in the short story section, I am going to assume this is the ...

Hey! This was lovely. You captured the internal conflict of Rosaline wonderfully. I have read many shakespeare plays but I have never read Romeo and Juliet, so I wasn't too ...

Hey Ikafe! I am back once again for a review! (Story spoilers abound!) So, you have yet another novel in the works! Are you working on your others? Sometimes it ...

Hi there! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Interesting piece here. Your writing style is very unique and fluent, albiet a bit forced sometimes. I have ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester here for a review. Good job here. This piece is a little short, but the description is lovely and the flow is good. I see the ...

Hey there! Esther Sylvester is here for another review. Mmkay, so this was good. I like the main character's (let's call her MC)voice a lot, although she could stand to ...

Hey firefly! Esther here for a review! Wow, the world that you have set up is fantastic. I am a huge fan of mythology so this prologue really called to ...

Hey there! Here's Esther for another review! I liked this one even better than the first! The pacing is much improved and you capture the dark tone better and more ...

Hola! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today! FIRST OFF: I like it! :) I'll cover the parts I didn't really like later in the review, but I'm ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I am Esther, and I will be reviewing you today. I saw you on the welcome board so I decided to check you work ...

Hello Firefly! Welcome to YWS! Here is Esther for a review. What I am going to do is comment on your plot flow, your characters, and nitpick (not grammatical btw)problems ...

Hi there! I am sorry for taking so long to review; I have been busy. FIRST OFF: Wow, I wish I had read this sooner. It was really good and ...

Hey there! I am here for a review, as requested. I apologize for taking so long. FIRST OFF: Well, you say this is going to be a novel in three ...

I know that this is for a dialogue only contest, just to say that before I start. REVIEW: Just to get this off of my chest: You could have cursed ...